This sits somewhere in the middle for me. Some of the details appeal to me more than others.
YYash Malhotra
I like the simple presentation. The understated style works well for my preferences. A little room to improve, but mostly positive.
This seems well considered overall. The understated style works well for my preferences. I would give it serious consideration.
KKabir Malhotra
The details could use more attention. More attention to the finishing details would help.
Some aspects look fine, but the overall impression is mixed. It has potential, but it does not quite come together. Not my first choice.
AAyaan Kulkarni
A promising idea with room for improvement. More attention to the finishing details would help.