The presentation leaves a lot to be desired. A simpler, more considered approach would help.
I would consider other options first. It has potential, but it does not quite come together.
MMeera Pillai
The overall presentation is okay. The overall look is simple and fairly ordinary.
It is not quite what I had in mind. I would want more clarity before choosing this.
Some aspects look fine, but the overall impression is mixed. A few details keep it from feeling well considered. I would keep comparing options.
I would consider other options first. I would want more clarity before choosing this. I would keep comparing options.