This would not be my choice again. I would need to see substantial improvements.
PPooja Kulkarni
I like the simple presentation. The overall balance is appealing. A little room to improve, but mostly positive.
The overall style appeals to me. A few small refinements could make it even better.
It is not quite what I had in mind. A few details keep it from feeling well considered. I would keep comparing options.
I struggle to find much to like here. I would need to see substantial improvements.
It is not quite what I had in mind. The overall style may suit others better.