I do not see enough value here. I would need to see substantial improvements. It would be a pass for me.
I wanted to like this more than I do. It has potential, but it does not quite come together. It needs more refinement for my taste.
My overall impression is neutral. The presentation could be a little more consistent. Worth comparing with a few alternatives.
SSamar Kulkarni
This would not be my choice again. The overall style does not appeal to me.
A promising idea with room for improvement. A few details keep it from feeling well considered. It needs more refinement for my taste.
ZZoya Kulkarni
This looks like a thoughtful choice. A few small refinements could make it even better.