The overall impression is disappointing. A simpler, more considered approach would help. It would be a pass for me.
This seems well considered overall. It would be high on my shortlist.
AAditya Mehta
The presentation leaves a lot to be desired. The overall style does not appeal to me. I would look elsewhere.
The overall style appeals to me. The small details make a positive difference. I would give it serious consideration.
This does not match my expectations. The small details make the overall impression worse. I would look elsewhere.
This would not be my choice again. The small details make the overall impression worse. I cannot rate the overall impression highly.