Overall, this falls well short of what I was hoping for. A simpler, more considered approach would help.
Overall, this falls well short of what I was hoping for. The presentation feels unfinished. It would be a pass for me.
MMeera Kulkarni
The overall impression is disappointing. There is too little here to justify the asking price for me. I cannot rate the overall impression highly.
I wanted to like this more than I do. I would prefer a simpler overall look.
The overall presentation really appeals to me. The presentation feels clear and thoughtfully put together.
It is not quite what I had in mind. A few details keep it from feeling well considered.