It looks fine, but nothing really stands out. The presentation could be a little more consistent.
RRiya Kulkarni
This does not match my expectations. A simpler, more considered approach would help. Not a good match for my preferences.
There is a lot to like here. It would be high on my shortlist. A little room to improve, but mostly positive.
The overall impression is disappointing. The small details make the overall impression worse. I cannot rate the overall impression highly.
The details could use more attention. It has potential, but it does not quite come together. It needs more refinement for my taste.
A reasonable option if the style suits you. There is enough to like, though a few details could improve.