The overall impression is disappointing. I would need to see substantial improvements. It would be a pass for me.
A good overall impression. The presentation is clear and easy to appreciate.
I would consider other options first. A few details keep it from feeling well considered.
The presentation leaves a lot to be desired. The overall style does not appeal to me. I cannot rate the overall impression highly.
A promising idea with room for improvement. More attention to the finishing details would help. Not my first choice.
VVarun Malhotra
This is exactly the kind of style I like. I appreciate the straightforward approach. This would be near the top of my shortlist.