Some aspects look fine, but the overall impression is mixed. More attention to the finishing details would help. I would keep comparing options.
RRiya Kulkarni
The presentation leaves a lot to be desired. A simpler, more considered approach would help. It would be a pass for me.
A good overall impression. A few small refinements could make it even better.
The details come together nicely. A few small refinements could make it even better.
I would consider other options first. It has potential, but it does not quite come together. There is room for a better overall impression.
The details could use more attention. More attention to the finishing details would help.