I do not see enough value here. The presentation feels unfinished. Not a good match for my preferences.
The presentation leaves a lot to be desired. A simpler, more considered approach would help.
There are positives and negatives here. The presentation could be a little more consistent. It comes down to personal preference.
The presentation leaves a lot to be desired. The small details make the overall impression worse.
Some aspects look fine, but the overall impression is mixed. A few details keep it from feeling well considered.
This is exactly the kind of style I like. I appreciate the straightforward approach.