Some aspects look fine, but the overall impression is mixed. It has potential, but it does not quite come together. There is room for a better overall impression.
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Ishaan Pillai
The details could use more attention. It has potential, but it does not quite come together. It needs more refinement for my taste.
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Dev Jain
The presentation leaves a lot to be desired. The overall style does not appeal to me. I would look elsewhere.